Wednesday, 18 October 2017

Taku whanau

Taku whānau
WALT specify who someone is and what their relationship is to you
Kia ora. Ko Veshay au.

Ko Denis taku koro. Ko Eileen taku kuia. Ko Kiri taku kuia. Ko David taku pāpā.
Ko Denise taku māmā. Ko Denzel taku tuahine. Ko Xavier taku Teina..
Ko wai mā rātou?
Ko tēnei taku whānau. Ko ia taku pāpā. Ko ia taku māmā. Ko ia taku tuahine.

Ko tēnei taku whānau.

I enjoyed most about doing this is learning how to write in moari and i found challenging is how to write in moari and figure out what side you came from.

Wednesday, 27 September 2017

Diamante Poem: Gummy

WALT: write our own Diamante Poem.
I enjoyed the most was writing about the delicious gummy and I find challenging is to find adjectives that describe the gummy. And I might do something different next time and do more adjectives and detail.

Thursday, 7 September 2017

Wednesday, 30 August 2017

WALT headline news .


Cinderella has lost her glass slipper .

Once upon a time lived a woman who had been working for her whole painful life with her ugly wicked sisters in a homeless tower that was freezing and lonely . Then one day she escaped from the tower and went to the castle of magic . It was beautiful . Then the fairy god mother came to her and made Cinderella look pretty with her glass slippers . Fairy god mother looked  bloated . But she could make Cinderella look more beautiful than all the other girls .

Thursday, 24 August 2017

Is it okay to wright to climb trees ?

WALT write our opinion we have be learning to wright Oreo writing . Its challenging to remember it .

In my opinion I think it's wrong to climb trees .

It can damage the environment.
You can destroy the trees by hurting the roots but trees give you air.

If you damages tree animals have nowhere to live .

You might even damage your lung and when you fall down you can't breathe properly .

If you break the branch underneath you will fall on to the ground .

If you climb a tree the tree might fall on the road and cause a big crash .

You will swing on it and snap and fall on the road and a car came and crashed into the tree branch .

And that's why i don't believe that we don't climb trees .

Wednesday, 23 August 2017

Cross country practice

WALT wright more and put my story in the past .
At 9.30am on a foggy Monday morning room one went to cross country practice at Kaikohe west schools back field .

First we walked to our age groups and lined up . We met friends there and we waited for our turn to run . I waited for a long time so my friends and I played games so we won't get bored from waiting to long .

Next it was the ten year old girls turn to run but first we needed to exercise our muscle so we don't get sore in the middle of running up monument hill and running around the block twice .

Finally I felt a drop of rain then I started sprinting hard to the front gate before it rain but i was too late i got soaked and ran straight back to class where it was dry .